This was immersive (as others have said) and intriguing and disturbing. Chillborn - great name/concept. They sound very menacing and this human, born in the wrong place, it is likely they're never going to fit anywhere. Your writing was spare but succinct and included wonderful imagery. I hope you write more.
This left me wanting to learn more. This has best seller book written all over it.
Imagery is fantastic in this.
I have to know what happens now
Love this, so immersive and disarming. Great work ❤️
This was immersive (as others have said) and intriguing and disturbing. Chillborn - great name/concept. They sound very menacing and this human, born in the wrong place, it is likely they're never going to fit anywhere. Your writing was spare but succinct and included wonderful imagery. I hope you write more.
So beautiful